I like the Coca-cola picture showing the headquarter of the company. It was cute. And the colored area of each market provides information. I see that you have pointed out different types of development (I guess) of Coca cola such as the "Coca-Cola Hellenic", but I think it would be better if you title the signs by locations instead of "Coca-Cola XX" and then describe what are they in the description area, it would be clearer. Also, I think some of the lines can be omitted because there are no description of what they are for. At last I suggest if you use different types of signs on the map, it will be more interesting. =]
You are so good job, and I like the coca-cola picture too, and,information of the consumption percent is so good idea. But, I think it will be better if you change the name of icon into country’s name.
You did a very good job on the map. You show how Coca-cola globalized itself by showing a lot of details in the map. Other than that, different colors and the logo make readers easier to follow your map. One thing you could improve is you could use different icons/signs to represent different teams.
I agree with the earlier comments here- good job! :) You have provided a detailed and organized map which is easy to follow map, different colors to hightlight the different world regions. (Is the naming of the different world regions based off a study, thought the perimeter was sort of odd, why do you not use Europe and Asia as two separate areas vs EU and Eurasia? ) I think what Man Yi Dilys Ng said about using different color/icons to represent different aspects of the coca cola foundation would make it even more easy to read - it seems like you have kind of done this but its unclear to me what the different colors represent, but maybe you explained this in the explanation box we cant see here? Also there were some lines that had no name, or description e.g. Line 33, 17 etc - either delete these if you don't use them, or give them a description.
Overall a good map, which with a few tiny adjustments will be really great! :) Good luck
I like the Coca-cola picture showing the headquarter of the company. It was cute. And the colored area of each market provides information. I see that you have pointed out different types of development (I guess) of Coca cola such as the "Coca-Cola Hellenic", but I think it would be better if you title the signs by locations instead of "Coca-Cola XX" and then describe what are they in the description area, it would be clearer. Also, I think some of the lines can be omitted because there are no description of what they are for. At last I suggest if you use different types of signs on the map, it will be more interesting. =]
ReplyDeleteBy Weng Ian Kuok
You are so good job, and I like the coca-cola picture too, and,information of the consumption percent is so good idea. But, I think it will be better if you change the name of icon into country’s name.
ReplyDeleteBy eunjoo kim
You did a very good job on the map. You show how Coca-cola globalized itself by showing a lot of details in the map. Other than that, different colors and the logo make readers easier to follow your map. One thing you could improve is you could use different icons/signs to represent different teams.
ReplyDeleteBy Man Yi Dilys Ng
I agree with the earlier comments here- good job! :) You have provided a detailed and organized map which is easy to follow map, different colors to hightlight the different world regions. (Is the naming of the different world regions based off a study, thought the perimeter was sort of odd, why do you not use Europe and Asia as two separate areas vs EU and Eurasia? ) I think what Man Yi Dilys Ng said about using different color/icons to represent different aspects of the coca cola foundation would make it even more easy to read - it seems like you have kind of done this but its unclear to me what the different colors represent, but maybe you explained this in the explanation box we cant see here?
ReplyDeleteAlso there were some lines that had no name, or description e.g. Line 33, 17 etc - either delete these if you don't use them, or give them a description.
Overall a good map, which with a few tiny adjustments will be really great! :) Good luck
Fanny Nicolaisen
Never mind the comment about different color/icons - saw the description now and it all made perfect sense! :)
ReplyDeleteGood job Kelly, such a detailed map!!!
ReplyDelete-Tony Tsao
This is a great map and clearly shows how largely Coca Cola has globalized
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